The ultimate guide to writing cold emails that get responses (with examples)
Learn how Fyxer.AI’s Founding Sales Executive, Alex Jackson, turns cold outreach into real conversations — with templates, AI workflows, and a human-first approach.
Cold emailing is one of the most misunderstood parts of modern sales. It’s not about blasting generic templates or hoping for luck — it’s about clarity, relevance, and genuine curiosity.
We sat down with Alex Jackson, founding sales hire at Fyxer.AI, to unpack what makes a cold email work, how to personalise outreach without overdoing it, and what the best cold email templates have in common.
Before we look at what makes a cold email work, Alex started with what not to do — the habits that kill response rates fast.
Why most cold emails fail
There are three big reasons cold emails fail in 2025:
Writing emails that are too long.
Assuming prospects care about your message and being overconfident or presumptive.
Using templated, outdated, or over-used phrasing that feels robotic.
Of these three, the length of your email is arguably the most important. You need to be aiming for short, concise and packed with value.
“People think more information is better. But most emails are read on a phone — if it’s longer than 150 words, it’s too long.
He explains that prospects don’t owe you their attention. You need to earn it quickly by being relevant, respectful, and to the point.
Fyxer organizes your inbox and drafts replies in your voice.
You’re writing to people who get pitched every day. They don’t want three paragraphs of background — they want to know, in a few lines, what you do and how it helps them.
He adds that if your tone feels arrogant or assumptive, that’s an instant delete. “There’s a fine line between being confident and being overfamiliar.” Instead, Alex recommends being curious and inquisitive:
You want to come across as genuinely curious, asking questions rather than assuming or pushing too hard. Ultimately it’s about being human - that’s what gets people to engage.
The ideal cold email format
Once you’ve mastered the mindset, structure becomes everything. A successful cold email template follows a clear, human structure.
Alex breaks it down like this:
Personal greeting: Keep it warm but professional.
Relevance line: Mention something specific about the recipient or their company (a recent post, award, deal)
Value proposition: Explain, in one sentence, what you help people like them achieve (ideally a tangible metric)
Proof point: Give an example or short case study (another brand you've helped)
Question hook: End with a question they can answer easily.
Sign off: Keep it simple and natural.
Alex goes on to give a quick example:
Hi Tom,
I saw you’re a Finance Director at X.
We help finance teams reduce reconciliation time by 40% using automated reporting. It’s what we did for [competitor] and [competitor].
Is that something you’re also looking to improve this quarter?”
Best, Alex
This simple cold sales email template gives context, value, and credibility — without pressure.
Once you’ve nailed the structure, the next challenge is getting people to actually open your email.
The hook: Subject lines that get opened
Your subject line is your first impression. Alex recommends using data-driven hooks to catch attention.
We found that including a statistic or insight in the subject line can triple open rates. People respond to credibility and numbers.
Example subject lines
“Quick question about your 2025 growth targets”
“How [Similar Company] cut costs by 22%”
“26% of finance leaders say this is their biggest challenge”
Each one uses curiosity, relevance, and brevity.
Think: what insight can I provide this stakeholder? What's the one thing they need to know?
Subject lines also need to be short, else they can get cut off your screen on mobile. The optimal character length for email subject lines is 40-50 characters (6-10 words), so aim to cut words you don't need.
The perfect tone
Tone matters as much as content. “You’re trying to start a conversation, not close a deal in the first email,” Alex says. “Be curious, polite, and concise.”
He also advises against over-personalizing in a way that feels awkward or creepy. You want to blend it into the question you're going to ask, or an insight you have.
“If someone said ‘How was New York?’ I’d find that weird,” he laughs. “But if they said ‘I saw you were in New York — I hear a lot of teams there are exploring automation. Is that something on your radar?’ — that’s a smart angle.”
Don’t ask for a call in your first email. Start by asking a question that opens dialogue — something they can reply to with one line.
Initially, stay curious and ask what their challenges are, if what you're saying resonates, if they're tackling a certain problem this quarter.
Only after a few exchanges should you suggest a quick chat:
In follow-ups, I start with a question to engage them, and if they show interest, then I suggest a call. It’s a gradual, personalized sequence."
In terms of how Alex phrases the ask, he says:
“If this sounds relevant, happy to jump on a 15-minute call to see if it’s a fit.”
This approach feels natural, not pushy.
How to sign off a cold email
Alex’s rule of thumb: be polite, professional, and easy to reply to. Good examples include:
“Thanks for your time,”
“Appreciate your thoughts,”
“Warm regards,”
“A friendly, human sign-off beats anything overly formal,” he says.
Building your cold email campaign
Great cold email campaigns are about sending one perfect message — it’s about persistence, timing, and variety. You have to think of it more like an outbound email strategy, not one moment in time.
Alex says most prospects need around 13 touch points (across email, calls, LinkedIn messages, etc.) before they respond.
Consistency wins. But every follow-up has to bring something new — a data point, an article, a stat — not just ‘I'm bumping this up'. That's one way to agitate people.
This isn't about spamming people, it's about showing value.
When I say thirteen touch points, that doesn’t mean spamming them thirteen times. It means showing up across different platforms in a smart, value-driven way.
Instead, think of each message as a micro-conversation that moves the relationship forward.
Alex recommends breaking your campaign into clear stages — balancing persistence with professionalism:
Day 1 – Initial cold email
A short, relevant introduction that demonstrates understanding and curiosity. End with an open question rather than a sales pitch.
Option 1 – Data-driven version
Subject: 63% of [industry] leaders say this slows them down
Hi [Name],
I read your post about [topic] and thought you’d find this stat interesting — 63% of [industry peers] say [problem].
At [company], we’ve been helping teams like yours tackle that by [solution/outcome].
Is this something you’re exploring right now?
Best, [Name]
Option 2 – Light conversational version
Subject: Thought this might save you time
Hi [Name],
Saw you’re at [Company] and wanted to share something quick.
We recently helped [similar company] [achieve result], and I thought it might be relevant given what you’re doing with [initiative or project].
Is [problem] something you're looking at this quarter?
Best, [Name]
Day 3 – LinkedIn connection or follow-up message
Send a brief, personalized note when connecting:
Hi [Name], I came across your post on [topic]. Really liked your take on [point]. Curious, are you also exploring [related challenge or idea] at [Company]?
If they accept, follow up later with a non-sales interaction — such as commenting on a post or sharing a helpful resource.
Day 5 – Second email with added value
Reference your first message, then provide something useful — a short stat, a case study, or an article that aligns with their priorities.
I mentioned earlier how [problem] affects [industry]. Thought you might find this resource useful — it’s a 2-min read on how [company] tackled it.
Day 8 – Quick call or voicemail (optional)
If relevant, a light-touch call can work wonders. Keep it under 30 seconds:
Hey [Name], just following up on my email about [topic]. Thought I’d check if [benefit] is something you’re exploring.
Day 10 – LinkedIn engagement
Like or comment meaningfully on one of their posts — something genuine, not forced. It keeps you visible without pushing a sales agenda.
Day 14 – Final follow-up email
A polite close-out that keeps the door open:
Just checking in one last time. I know you’re busy — understand if now’s not the right time. Should I follow up again next quarter?
You might try more touch points, or less. Depending on the responses you get from your target customers.
A multi-channel cold email campaign builds familiarity and trust. Seeing your name across different contexts (inbox, LinkedIn, voicemail) makes you recognizable — and that familiarity increases reply rates.
“People buy from people,” Alex explains. “When your name pops up a few times, in different but relevant ways, you go from stranger to someone they actually know.”
Using multiple touch points also allows you to tailor your tone.
On email, you can share facts, stats, and structure.
On LinkedIn, you can be more conversational and personal.
On calls or voicemails, you can show warmth and tone that text can’t convey.
When each channel reinforces the same message — who you are, how you help, and why it matters — your outreach starts to feel like a relationship rather than a pitch.
Creative ways to stand out
Sometimes, breaking the pattern helps. Alex has seen success with thoughtful, human touches — sending a relevant book, a coffee voucher, or even small branded gifts.
It’s not about bribery, instead it’s about showing thoughtfulness and making people remember you.
He's seen people use gifts like a cactus with a company logo or a short personalized note in previous roles. “At worst, they smile. At best, they reply.”
Cold email templates (for you to copy and customize)
Template 1 — Problem solver
Subject: Quick question about [specific challenge]
Hi [Name],
I saw you’re [job title] at [company]. We helped [similar company] achieve [specific result].
Is [problem] also something you're tackling?
[Name]
Template 2 — Insights-driven
Subject: 72% of [their industry] leaders said [pain point]
Hi [Name],
I read your post on [topic] and thought this might resonate.
[Insert one-sentence insight or stat].
We’ve helped teams like yours improve [result] — would you be open to a quick chat?
[Name]
One of the biggest levers: Personalization
Don't just copy and paste directly, make sure you tailor your cold prospecting emails.
Alex suggests desk research on LinkedIn, company news pages or looking at competitors:
Before reaching out, I look for specific recent activities or posts by the prospect. Referencing these shows genuine interest and makes the email stand out.
Going deeper than just news items, you want to show that you understand the target customer underlying psychology, or at least showing curiosity.
It’s about understanding their pain points and providing personalized insight. Be human, ask questions rather than assume, and show you’ve done your homework.
The safest approach to take is curiosity. Alex's biggest tip is:
You have to assume they’re the expert in their field. Don’t come in acting like you know more than them. It’s about respecting their knowledge and asking questions to learn, not to lecture.
When to use AI (and when not to)
Using AI to copy and paste a cold outreach template from ChatGPT is risky, says Alex.
If you can imagine a thousand other reps sending that same sentence, delete it.
AI is now a powerful part of modern sales workflows — but only when used intelligently. As Alex explains:
The biggest advantage of AI isn’t replacing human outreach - it’s removing the repetitive admin so you can spend more time actually connecting with people.
That’s what you want to automate - the manual tasks that drains your focus.
Instead of relying on one-size-fits-all AI tools, Alex recommends using AI that adapts to your tone and style.
With Fyxer, for example, the system learns your voice from your last 300 emails and then drafts smart, context-aware replies that sound like you — not a bot.
Alex uses Fyxer to sort his inbox, draft responses, and record calls, saving around 22 hours every week.
That’s time he reinvests into high-value work: personalizing outreach, building relationships, and closing deals.
Phrases to avoid
What you want to avoid is using any common sales phrases in your first line. This wastes prime attention real estate (the first few words of your email) and signals “sales email” immediately.
Alex’s Golden Rule:
Real connection comes from sounding like a human, not a template.
Here's four big tropes to avoid at all costs:
1. Empty openers
These sound generic, automated, or insincere:
“I hope this email finds you well.”
“I know you’re busy, so I’ll keep this short.”
“Just checking in.”
“I wanted to reach out.”
“Touching base.”
“Circling back.”
✅ Better alternatives:
“I saw your post on [topic] and thought it was spot on.”
“Noticed [Company] is doing [initiative] — curious how that’s going.”
“I saw your team just launched [project] — looks like a strong move toward [goal].”
“I’ve been following [Company]’s updates — your focus on [theme] really stands out.”
3. Overconfidence
These assume pain or need — and alienate the reader fast:
“You’re probably struggling with…”
“You need to be doing…”
“This will be a game changer for your business.”
“I guarantee results.”
“Our solution is perfect for you.”
✅ Better alternatives:
“I’m curious whether [challenge] is something your team’s dealing with right now.”
“From what I’ve seen in [industry], [problem] tends to be a common bottleneck — does that resonate?”
4. Empty promises
These are buzzword-heavy and vague:
“We help companies save time and money.”
“We streamline processes and drive efficiency.”
“We deliver cutting-edge solutions.”
“We’re a leading provider of…”
✅ Better alternatives:
“We helped [similar company] cut [specific process] time by 30%.”
“Teams like [peer company] use us to reduce [specific pain point] in half.”
Now you know what to send and how, what should you look for in terms of results?
What's a good success rate?
Alex explains that a realistic cold email success rate sits between 5–10% for responses — a range most experienced sales teams would consider healthy.
It’s hard to say exactly because it depends on your industry and audience, but anywhere around five to ten percent is solid. You'll find that Account Executives have higher response rates compared to SDRs (Sales Development Representatives), mainly due to their experience in knowing what works.
Good open rates range between 40–60%, while 2–4% of your total sends turning into genuine conversations is a great sign your outreach is landing.
When you start tracking these numbers, the real lesson becomes clear: success isn’t just about volume — it’s about quality and consistency. The best cold emailers aren’t sending more messages; they’re sending better ones, refining tone, timing, and targeting with every send. That shift — from quantity to quality — is where the next phase of outreach is heading.
The future of cold outreach
The future of cold outreach isn’t about sending more emails — it’s about sending better ones. AI and automation have made it easier to reach people, but what still makes the difference is the human element: curiosity, respect, and timing.
Technology can speed up the process, but it can’t replace genuine connection. With the right tools, salespeople can free up time by automating admin and repetitive tasks, so they can focus on what really drives results — building trust, personalising messages, and listening to their customers.
Cold emails aren’t about hacks. They’re about empathy, timing, and relevance. When you write like a real person — and offer real value — people respond.
The reps who succeed will be those who use AI intelligently, lead with empathy, and approach outreach as a conversation.
